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Showing posts with label novel. Show all posts

Sunday, December 1, 2013

TWO New Reviews on Ariel's Cottage (A Price for Love)


http://booksbyjvd.wordpress.com/2013/12/01/two-new-reviews-on-ariels-cottage-a-price-for-love/

If you didn't know if you'd like Ariel's Cottage (Kindle - A Price for Love) before, then maybe you will realize after reading these two reviews how good this story really is.  One 4 out of 5 and one 5 out of 5+.  There are other reviews also.

The first editor to read it called it a powerful romantic suspense.  See what these two reviewer have to say.  These Good reads postings are also on Amazon.

http://www.amazon.com/Ariels-Cottage-Judith-Victoria-Douglas/dp/147764671X/  (5 reviews)












http://www.amazon.com/Price-Love-Ariels-Cottage/dp/1470048884/ref=la_B007KCUA2Y          (2 reviews)

Saturday, November 30, 2013

Writing, Acting, Appreciation and Reviews

This is mainly for readers, but writers who are also readers may be able to identify.

http://megancashmanbooks.wordpress.com/2013/11/26/id-say-writing-is-like-acting/

This blog posting I'm attaching, by Megan Cashman -- someone I appreciate, respect and follow -- tells it well.  

I have always equated writing with acting.  When writing I might have to go though an action to know how to describe it happening so a reader will understand well enough to conceptualize it.  The same with an expression.

Actors on the stage are lucky to get their appreciation known to them immediately through applause.  Movie actors (or radio, especially in the past) have each other to congratulate as well as audiences sentiment, public reviews, and the box-office count.

Writers, especially independents, well, we can watch the sales count, and hope some lone soul will take the time to post a review (since we all know professional paid-for reviews don't count).  Since the sales count doesn't usually go up without the reviews any show of appreciation may never come, so we are the working, often truly starving artists you hear about.

Our rewards are often few, unless you become very popular, like Stephen King or Neil Gaiman, to name only two.  And, of course, those with big name publishers have all the promotion and review getting done for them in advance by passing out hundreds of free ARC -- advanced (before publication)  readers' copies -- of their book for reviews.  Who can say "no" to one of the big guys?  And for a free book, probably signed by the author no less.  Neil Gaiman's book, The Ocean at the End of the Lane, had over 1500 reviews after it was first released.  How? Signed ARCs.  In a obscure sense its like bribery.

We independent authors/publishers, who (like me) do the same work as several people within a big publishing firm, have a harder time finding an audience and especially finding members of that meager audience who are willing to take the time to make a written, public comment.  The friends who will commit are few, but we know not to rely on the comments of friends and family who may be biased for us.  That's why Amazon knocks off reviews that look like they could be by family members.  And if you don't think writing is hard work then read Roy's blog post -- http://roydimond.wordpress.com/2013/11/23/242/#like-242  He even has a publisher.

Independents resort to author to author reviews -- a like for a like.  It gets the number of reviews up, which can increase sales a bit, because John Q. Public doesn't know the difference.  They go by the paid-for reviews after all.  Hard to compete with money when your starving.

I have begged for a review from someone who read one of my books and loved it, and it never came.  I have been promised numerous reviews that never show up, even by other writers who have to look me in the face on occasion.  I've given books to others who don't even acknowledge receipt, much less thank me for it.  It's just a book, not a novel of a complete life scenario of several others a writer has to create, devise, get as correct and in order as an architect of a high rise building, airplane, boat, or spaceship has to get his construction.  And it can "fall apart" with less error than any of those objects.

I have started the giveaway of my hard work for no royalty in hopes of a few kind appreciative souls out there who might post what they thought of it.  Next time you get something free from its creator, a table, a plant, a clay pot, a painting or sculpture, you let me know if you really appreciated all that went into creating it.  I don't think so, but it will definitely more so than you would if it was just a book.

I always hope, so my faith in humanity isn't completely dashed, yet.  But I am also too often disappointed.  I feel lucky I am still compelled to write even with extremely little or no reward.

It's like working to train and clean up my horse, perfect my riding, then go to a horse show where there is no audience, no judge and no competitors.  My horse and I are the only ones in the ring.  It's like that part of life was cancelled and no one told me.  I immediately picture myself a lone rider on a vast field on a horse with my bare legs on a doeskin and a single rein from the horses mouth, with feathers in our hair, assuming we are the only ones like that on the planet.  At first it's lonely, but eventually I come to have a peace about it, and dread the moments its necessary to come in contact with others.

That's especially true of those I run into on a regular basis who have give book marks for each book and suggestion they look it up on Amazon.  Few can look me in the eye when we meet, so I know they never bothered.  People just don't seek out writers, or their books, like they seek out grocers or doctors, or even lawyers.

When I get a review that is thorough and professional by someone who doesn't have to do it, and is not receiving any pay for it, I boast about them.  Why, because they need the appreciation also.

I think the best way to wake up the public to a writer's need for appreciation for all their work is to make them aware of its necessity and steer them away from the paid-for professionals. I know I relied on a particular (unnamed here) review company for the books I chose before I became a writer, never realizing it was paid for.  You get what you pay for, so it makes sense the more you pay the better the review.  That doesn't mean the book is really that good.  It only means it's been set in your mind that it is, so if you find it is not, you know, something must be wrong with you.  Well, it's time to stop that kind of thinking and make a choice of your own.  And show writers without backing, independent writers, how much they are appreciated.  Granted there are some who are very good or error few, but if the talent is there then encouragement should be no less than you would give a child in discovery.

I hope you become enlightened as a reader and begin to appreciate one aspect of the work that goes into creating a book.  Then consider posting a comment for the next book your read telling of your experience with it, whether you like it or not.  Like the middle child who gets less attention, we'll even take a negative blow to know someone noticed what we'd worked so hard to do.


Monday, September 30, 2013

Two New Reviews

I've posted these latest reviews on my Wordpress blog, It's All About the Books!  Click on the link to get to each, or check out the books on Amazon, Shelfari, Barnes & Noble or Goodreads.  They are also on LibraryThing.

And a reminder: Miracle Belle, A Horse with a Secret is still free as a Kindle through Tuesday, 10/1/13 and Twisted Vine: An Anthology of Short Stories and Poems is still free as a Kindle through Wednesday, 10/2/13.

Five star review for TREE & SKY: The Secrets of Meshyah's World

http://booksbyjvd.wordpress.com/2013/09/30/tree-sky-review-5-stars/







Four stars for Where the Horses Run, Book I, Mass Extinction

http://booksbyjvd.wordpress.com/2013/09/30/a-review-by-a-horse-lover-reader/






HAPPY READING, EVERYONE!

Friday, September 27, 2013

FREEBIES FOR THE WEEKEND


ATTENTION ALL READERS!

If you want to get a taste of my writing styles,  here is your chance.  

The Kindle editions of three of my publications are now available for FREE on Amazon.

MIRACLE BELLE, A Horse with a Secret, will be FREE starting Friday, September 27 through Tuesday, October 1.
http://www.amazon.com/Miracle-Belle-Secret-Twisted-ebook/dp/B00DT4GQ6Q

This short story is from my Twisted Vine anthology, and is a spin-off of my novel trilogy, Where the Horses Run.  It's appropriate for older children, especially those who are acquainted with a few breeding terms included ~ DNA, fetus(es), (frozen) semen and ova.  I would love comments because I've worried about the age group to present it to.

Ten-year-old Trisha loves Belle, and her scientist father is the one who recreates this first horse after all the horses in the world disappear. 

Here is the connection for my UK readers.  http://www.amazon.co.uk/.../dp/B00DT4GQ6Q


Today I added the Anthology itself.  So, if you really want to get acquainted with my writing styles, which are different for each story, and get a taste of a few published and to-be-published novels through excerpts, then download the Kindle of TWISTED VINE: An Anthology of Short Stories and Poems.  It will be available Saturday, September 28 through Wednesday, October 2.

http://www.amazon.com/Twisted-Vine-Anthology-Stories-ebook/dp/B00DJTUYSC

There are poems and the complete stories of truncated versions included in novels.  If you like romance, Sci-fi and/or fantasy, there will be stories to interest you.  Many have a twist in time.  One is a tribute to my favorite Doctor Who episode in poem.

Here is the UK connection:  http://www.amazon.co.uk/Twisted-Vine-Anthology-Stories-ebook/dp/B00DJTUYSC



FREE FOR THE WEEKEND ONLY -- A PRICE FOR LOVE.  It’s the Kindle version of Ariel’s Cottage. the same romantic suspense that just received a five star review from a romantic suspense fan.  She was kind enough to post it for both books.
http://www.amazon.com/Price-Love-Ariels-Cottage-ebook/dp/B007RGJ7Q8



If you have a MAC, but no Kindle, there is a free Kindle download for your computer.

Friday, August 23, 2013

Latest Release

I'm excited to announce that the second book in my trilogy, Where the Horses Run, Sacred Hills, is now available.  Check it out on Amazon for the book or the Kindle from my author page HERE.
The Kindle Look Inside feature has the prologue to the middle of chapter four.  Read them to determine if this big book is for you.  If you haven't read Book I, Mass Extinction, check it out HERE.  It has the prologue to the first third of chapter five available for your reading determination.  I hope you find it intriguing.

Friday, February 22, 2013

Why I Wrote A Novel About Horses Disappearing from the World


George Washington was a horse loving president. He even took the time to brush his horse's teeth. Our current President, well not-so-much. He signed a bill to enable horses to be slaughtered in the US...


When I learned our fine president signed a bill to allow horse slaughter in the U. S. again, after all the work it took to get it stopped, I was devastated, then outraged.  I wrote my feelings about it under the  picture below and posted it on my tumblr site and the equine Facebook pages I'm connected to.  As of today I had almost four hundred likes on one Facebook page alone.  Many supportive comments and shares have also been made.  This is a horse loving country and we don't want to eat them, nor do we want other countries to eat our horses.  The only sound reason for allowing it would be to keep them from being shipped to Mexico and Canada where the conditions are deplorable.  Maybe there is some altruistic belief that here the sites would be monitored better and the horses wouldn't have to be hauled so far (without food or water) in cattle trucks (which are outlawed for horse hauling).  But the reason there was such a fight to shut our slaughterhouses down was because they weren't being monitored and the standards were so low horses suffered grievously.  Reports even revealed when there is difficulty killing a horse, because they do fight to avoid it, they are strung up by their hind legs alive, gutted and bled out.

If the world ever become truly civilized and advanced to a new evolutionary stage, then eating living things may finally stop.  But until then many suffer more than the general populations knows. 

Following my endearment I am posting a few other pictures I received on Facebook and reposted on tumblr and Facebook.  They aren't so nice.  Rescue organizations have worked hard to save horses neither old nor crippled, probably slow on the track, stolen, even pregnant and some babies, from the slaughterhouse.  Their job will be doubly hard now.  Oklahoma has already approved the re-opening of their slaughterhouses, and there is a restaurant in Philadelphia putting horse meat on the menu.  To me that's just gross, and I hope they lose patrons because of it.  All the eastern states are thick with horse lovers, having pony clubs, hunt clubs, point-to-point steeplechases, training stables, race tracks and breeding farms.  I've seen how close together training stables are in South Carolina.  It's much the same in the other states.
And I don't know about the rest of you, but I have no doubt that other slaughter animals go through similar circumstances.  An Inspector is not supposed to allow a bleeding animals to be rendered for human consumption.  There are good reasons for that, the most obvious is contamination, possibly infection.  I've been to a cattle auction and a steer with a broken and bleeding horn cannot go for slaughter.  But who knows what really happens.  To see what these horses go through is enough to want to stop eating any animal I haven't witnessed killed in a thoughtful, respective, humane manner.  The only thing is that often involves drugs which makes it inedible.  I have seen a deer hit in the heart with a high powered bullet turn and run until it falls.  It never knew what happened until it's heart stopped.  This is as good as nature's way of falling to a predator.  Man should be above doing it any other way.  
I will now have to edit the part out of Book II of Where the Horses Run, because the slaughterhouses are again open.  What I replace it with will not be nice.




When I look into the eyes of a horse I don't see just a horse.  I see a friend, a confidant, a partner, a free spirit, a indepentant thinker who gives in to my requests, even when they don't make sense to him.  I know his spirit and I share mine.  Whether we accomplish a little or a lot, we are a team.  He has given me more than any person is able and more than I can ever give back - courage, stamina, self-confidence, belief in myself and what I am capable of and more - so I care for his every need willingly.  Because of him I am not afraid of the big obstacles, the deep and wide trenches or threats from those bigger and stronger than I am.  I learn gentleness is wiser than harshness and one kind word of encouragement will gain more than all the loud, angry words combined.  No animal opens its heart to a human so willingly, giving all its trust when everything about the life we provide for them is contrary to their nature.  They should always live free, graze most of the day, wander where they wish and come to us only as a friend of their own free will.  No will to be free is stronger than that of a horse, yet we confine them and they accept it.  To treat them cruelly or without the consideration we expect in return is uncivilized, barbaric, selfish egocentric arrogance.  The noble horse, the throne of kings, deserves his titles, and so much more.  They deserve our love and respect.  They will always have mine. jvd

Now for the some references from my Facebook connection - EquineRescueNetwork :



 If you need to REHOME a horse, OR you are looking to ADOPT a horse, use the NEW FREE CLASSIFIEDS. They are also posted on our "view listings" tab on Facebook....

 This was taken at the Kaufman, Texas horse rendering plant before it was closed, less than a decade ago.

Now for the not so nice - read the captions:


I do not know what happened to this post, why it vanished, so I'll try again. This photo was taken inside the last legal U.S. slaughterhouse, Beltex here in Texas, in 2005. The mare in the picture shipped from Arizona to Texas and probably originated in SoCal. Note her racing plates, or sort of; on her LH, the shoe is barely hanging on. Meaning that she obviously raced and went straight onto the meat wagon. Photo taken by a US DOT investigator INSIDE THE BELTEX SLAUGHTER FACILITY. This mare was NOT part of the US DOT investigation, and I don't know why the US DOT investigator took hundreds of pictures inside Beltex itself. Perhaps s/he thought the situation was horrible and knew that it's easy for the public to dismiss photos produced by "animal rights activists"? Dunno. Do know that while the US DOT rep was taking these pictures, USDA inspectors were present. They saw nothing amiss. Nobody paid for this mare's suffering. She was thrown onto a truck, shipped across the country, terrified, and slaughtered... too slow, I guess. Posted on Facebook by Linda Broussard

I can't bring myself to post the graphic pictures, but refer you to the listed site for them.  This site also documents the conditions of slaughter.  Horses are rendered unconscious, and bled out with a still pumping heart.  Sometimes, with the rush to meet quotes, a killer won't take the time to do it correctly...as I stated about.  http://www.horsefund.org/horse-slaughter-images.php

You won't be able to eat after seeing these, and certainly never a horse.  You'll never look at a horse the same way knowing what they go through.
The following were taken at the Kaufman, Texas plant before it was closed.
Do these horses look disabled and ready to die?  That's what they're waiting in line for.


This is an obvious violation.  Read the caption.
From Jan. 1 – Nov. 17, 2005, USDA inspectors at Dallas Crown photographed violations committed under the Commercial Transport of Equines Slaughter Act, but didn’t act on them, according to a 906-page USDA document for that period obtained under the Freedom of Information Act. 
The document showed extensive, injuries, some intentionally inflicted by kill buyers and transporters, like eyes gouged out to keep horses from fighting on the trailers, especially since stallions were packed in next to geldings and mares. Both mares and geldings were also subjected to intentional blinding. 


And this is an obviously dead horse being lifted for delivery to the rendering site.  It may have been one of the lucky ones.  It was probably trampled in the crowded trailer, since outlawed for horse delivery.
I can't post the picture that goes with the caption below.  It's too graphic.  To describe it is enough: a young horse, probably a yearling, laying on its side after, hopefully, being killed.  It's left hind leg from the hock down is missing all but a piece of the bone hanging from skin.That's how the poor little girl arrived, as do many like her.  Other captions say that heads and limbs and hides were left out in bins, then transported through town dripping blood. 

Horses suffering from severed legs, compound fractures, head and other serious injuries, still births and death by trampling in double-decker trailers were some of the many photographs captured in the 906-page USDA document
No licenses were revoked and no penalties were assessed until 2008, when one buyer, Leroy Baker of Ohio, was ordered to pay $162,800—but refused, calling the charges “bogus.” In May, 2011, following public pressure, the US District Court for the Northern District of Ohio ordered garnishment of Baker’s bank accounts to collect the outstanding monies. http://galleries.forbes.com/gallery/Life_in_a_Slaughter_Town%3A_Kaufman,_Texas#image=0fqG2eg24m2Dq&view=filmstrip

There are many other sites.  Do a Google search for pictures horse slaughter.  And make a donation, petition and write letters.  If it doesn't stop it at least monitoring and enforcing might follow...for a while.

Friday, November 30, 2012

Another Review for Ariel's Cottage

http://booksbyjvd.wordpress.com
GO HERE, it's the second review down (so far)

Here is the newest review for Ariel's Cottage.  I'm very excited about it because someone who normally doesn't read this type of story really liked it.  That alone says a lot about how good a read it is.  I wish more would consider it.

It's also available in Kindle as A Price for Love: Ariel's Cottage.